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Based on a two part story by :iconlance-the-young:

Erika's New Perfume:
Part 1: [link]
Part 2: [link]

If you didn't read the last post a couple of weeks ago then you wouldn't have noticed my message about me being a regular at the Barnes&Nobles reading the manga section. Not to mention it's the holiday's so my little hobby is not the first thing on my mind. Of course that doesn't mean I'm not going continue for as the poet said "the show must go on," just a little slower than usual.

As for this scene. It's not exactly my best work, but I did think there is a few moments that are cute. As for the last panel, I just wanted to show off her eyes over the pages of the magazine, but I couldn't figured out a way to make it happen without compromising the integrity of the picture itself given my limited artist talent or lack there off. So I just decided to think of it as just watching her face through the magazine instead which is different, but not exactly what I had in mind. I think it works anyway. As for the title of BAD, well it's actually a parody of an already existing publication known as GOOD Magazine. Also the reason everything looks so dark is because at this stage Marie is a real bad apple but as time passes things will be brighter as she becomes a bad seed. Lastly you'll notice a change in dialogue, it's not that the original wasn't good it's just wanted her to say something different, but in character. lol

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ChetHatton's avatar
Aww man....

"Umm...." Erika wasn't exactly sure how to say this. "Does my diaper look different to you?"

Marie eyed the plastic garmet peeking from under her skirt, "Same plastic crap-catcher as always. Why?"

That was my favorite line from the text version.... :(