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Erika's New Perfume 2 by AbeSedecim Erika's New Perfume 2 by AbeSedecim
Based on a two part story by :iconlance-the-young:

Erika's New Perfume:
Part 1: [link]
Part 2: [link]

That last bit was a bit of randomness thrown into because I didn't want to waste the space. However, whereas some people believe those little boxes are meant for pure random talk I believe if you have to say something then it might as well be relavent.
Plus, I think it does bring up a good point, but if some kids didn't follow advice there woudl be no need for it would there? HA, put that in your cookie and crack it!
Yet, I digress...until the next page.


FIRST PAGE <<<<< PREVIOUS PAGE
NEXT PAGE >>>>> CHAPTER 2
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ChristmasSword Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008
you should have but the stranger looking her saying. "Uhm... no?" like the mayor of imaginationland after butters asked if he was gonna rape them. that would have been excellent use of the space.
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Lizuka Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2008
Very nice work, look forward to seeing more. There are certain parts of Erika I especially want to see.

Also, a suggestion - I would title it with numbers instead of the actual words - like Erika's New Perfume 2 instead of how it is now. Looks neater, and it's the only way you'll be able to fit them once you get into the ones with longer names.
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AbeSedecim Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2008
Thanks for the suggestion and don't worry there is more to come, but the wheels are barely greased so it may take a while before I get to what I think everyone wants to see.
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